animation- poor
humor- was ok, mainly just the 'stupidity' of males, there was a lot more you could do
audio- not bad

to be honest I laughed harder at your comments then at the vid :p but all in all it's passable :)

cheers!

like everyone else said, audio would have made this a LOT better.
the humour (albiet old) wasn't bad at all. however, evens if it was just you simply reading out the text outloud would have been a massive improvement. (steriotypical "comming soon" music with the voice would be evens better still.
add audio, and then re-submit it. that's my suggestion

and write a full review for this

pro's

1-you got the point across at what you were trying to achieve
2-there was movement on the screen.
3-you had audio.

con's

1-only one tween, frame by frame animation here and there makes animations more pleasurable to look at.
2-I don't think you have permission to this song.
3-wasting people's time and your own life, and costly bandwith from newgrounds uploaading stuff for the mere amusement of getting hatemail (another words your a troll)
4-needs a bacground, plain white is boreing and entertainless.
5-a good animation should have something diffrent happen (scence shange/camera panning or something) about every 3-5 seconds.

hope this helps!
now actually try to animate something.
good day to you sir.

Nick_B

this is freeking AWESOME!!!!

do you mind if I attemp to make this into a flash since I am bored tonight?
(no garentees if I'll actually finish...)

sweet ass tune man, it made me smile :D

good job, and keep up the good work :)

cheers 5/5 10/10

wow, I love how well that all fitted toghether! breat beat, great sound choice, and id dosn't get boring!